First of all, don't like the script format - not easy to read. Secondly, don't really care for the new characters. I'm a S/J girl and that's what I read for. I am interested in the Jen/Jack/Sam triangle and will read more if that's addressed. Not a Vala fan at all and hate having to learn new characters - that's the beauty of fanfiction - you're reading about old friends - and I don't have a clue who Ali and all those others are. If you address Jack/Jen then I will read those chapters. Otherwise, can't get too into this series. Give me the original Sg-1 - even IF it has to include whiney Daniel.
Good story BUT, as far as I'm concerned, Jen raped Jack. I sure hope she won't get preggo and that she takes her shots. It would be a real shame and I doubt Sam would survive this, she wants a baby from Jack so much and they went through hell getting where they're at. Sam would never leave Jack because she loves him so much but I fear that, if Jack knew, he'd have trouble dealing with this...Plse no preggo Jen, I beg you...
Just came back to add a rating. Great Story!
There are so many things I really enjoy about this series, and this story in particular.
Through out SG1 and beyond to SGU we have seen how Jack and Sam are often forced to carry on with the mission even when one of them is missing or hurt. To see how they are now as a married couple was touching. It is an unfortunate twist that Maj. Hailey has got in the middle, and I see trouble ahead for them.
Also we see how much Cam depends on his new team members. MJ's roll (not just as the twin of Vanessa James or the guy who is in love with an alien)is explored more.
Also we get to see Daniel as the true friend is, to vala, Jack and Sam. And how important they are to him.
I know I don't usually get all deep with the reviews, but I wanted you to know how much I am truly enjoying this series. I can't wait for the next story!
I finally make member to follow this story that I love! This Vala story is good.
I am so excited when I see the wedding photographs! I LOVE it!!!!
This story is so good! My Jack was trapped with that girl! And now for the trouble. Sam so worried and Daniel. This story for stargate I love.
Love the wedding album AWSOME! :-)
Author's Response: Thanks! Doing the album was fun. I am a terrible photo editor, but I think it turned out ok and funny too :)
Another great addition. I agree the backdrop story of Vala's childhood is great! Some very emotional moments with her and Cameron, but especially the one ith her and Daniel. Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you for continuing to read and review! I have been waiting to tell this story. 'Bounty' was one of my favorite episodes, so it was nice to be able to write something that tied into that episode.
Really enjoted delving into Vala's past. Nice story connection. So sad that she is going through this. I think this was daniel and Vala's "Unending" moment, but unfortunatly Daniel is with someone else. Can't wait to see how this turns out.
Author's Response:Thanks for always reviewing my stories.
Yes this was their 'Unending' moment. But Daniel is such a good guy, not a cheater so, it just wasn't meant to be... maybe.
Great story. I just read the whole series and now I want to read more. I'll be waiting for the next one.
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed the series. thank you for taking time to review. The next one is coming in the next few days!
I was happy to find the next story posted so soon! This is one of my favorites (for obvious reasons) even tho it doesn't have a lot of Jack and Sam. I thought Jack was hillarious in the last chapter. You're depiction of him was spot on.
I like that you picked JL as the inspiration for Dr. Sinclair.
Vala is one wild child. If anyone was going to get freaky with the natives, it figures it might be her. The Vala/Cam storyline is awesome. Can't wait to see what's going to happen between them.
Can't wait for the next story! Great Job!
Oh I forget review this one of my favorite. I like action and I like very sexy. And The alien seens weird and also sexy. I think is good! I Like this a lot.
Its so happy of Sam and Jack got married. They is the perfect couple of Stargate. And they honemoon is so sexy i love it all. Sam is so lucky girl! Jennifer Keller is naughty girl with the sex, but I like reading it.
Author's Response:I am glad you liked it. Yes this is Sam and Jack's Happy ending, but they will be front and center in future stories. I just wrote one tha is coming up soon with a big twist for Jack and Sam. Thank You for reviewing!
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I will admit, the picture made me look. The first Chapter is smoking, so I can tell that the rest is going to be too. I realise this is a series so I am going to go back and read them before I read any more. If this first chapter is an indication then i will have some enjoyable reading for a while.
Just from reading the 1st chapter, I must say Way to Go Daniel. Wow. And in the pic, it looks like the girl from Cloverfield and Melrose. She is very pretty. Is this the new Dr. (Daniel's Girl friend)and is Carolyne still with the SGC?
Author's Response:Thank you for the review! I'm so glad you're going to read the series. There are a couple of things that are spoilers if you read this one first. Also the first story in the series will give you a lot of information about why certain couples are together and other couples are not. I really wanted to create something different while still letting Jack and Sam have their happy ending (so to speak) I hope you enjoy the series, and I love getting reviews.
Oh and yes about the actress in the picture. My hubby AT has a huge crush on her so I figured I would use her as the muse for the new character. Plus ahe fits what the character should look like ( a bit of a look a like younger version of Sha're which will become an issue in future stories )
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This was very erotica story I like. Why not Jack and Sam going to this planet for fun sex. Maybe in future story jajaja! Sorry Sam not in SG1 team any more she would be sexy there and Jack so handsome would be sexy there to. I like all the story from the first one to now is very good and sexy. I like sexy Vala and Cameron and Daniel Jackson. And new ones is very good to.
Author's Response:I am glad you liked it. I was in the mood to write something really raunchy and beautiful all at the same time, when i came up with this story. I tried to find a way to put Jack and Sam in this one, but I could not make it work with the storyline of the whole series. I am thinking about having the couple visit the planet in the future to conduct some negotiations. Thanks for the review!
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I like this. Going to read the whole series now. Very Interesting.
Author's Response: Thank You for the Review. Glad you liked it!
Nice plot twist with the new Dr.
Great seeing all the characters and kind of who is with who.
This gets a 10 for the Honemoon storyline alone, but overall it's all good.
I look forward to the next story in the series
Author's Response:Thank you for always reading and reviewing my stories. You know I am not really a writer, just someone who loves and missed Stargate. So it is such a pleasure for me that someone is enjoying my take on the SGC and what is happening now with the characters.
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This is good stuff! Been following the Series and I am hooked!
I didn't know Dr. Keller had it in her lol
Jack and Sam's honey moon night was off the hook!
Can't wait to finish this story.
Very enjoyable. I really liked the inclusion of SGU, and Rodney from SGA!
Author's Response: Thank You. I really am working hard to make the story a full Stargate Series involving many characters not just SG1, tho it will primarily revole around Stargate Command.
Very nice addition to the series. Short but sweet. I really like seeing how the story of SGC is coming together. Not a lot of Ansamble works that utilise all characters and New characters, so this is great!
Looking reading to seeing more.
Sorry, I see that the content of the chapters is ow gone. i am working on this, and getting them up and in proper format, but it is taking some time.
I hope to have it all back up by the end of the weekend if not sooner.
I hate to tell you this, but your story content is gone now. It was there before, but I just came to re-read it and the last few chapters are empty. I am not sure if you are working on it, but those were the best chapters. I hope you get them back up soon.
Another great Chapter. Thanks for writing.
Great story! I have been following and will keep following them! These las 2 Chapters we Awesome!
Author's Response: Thank You!
I really enjoyed this story. very sexy, and interesting.
I am glad tealc was in this one, and the last chapter was very sweet.
Author's Response:Thank you for the review. It is hard to write future stories with Teal'c in them, but I am doing my best to add him in when ever it makes sense.
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