Great story. Love how you write. Wish you had been one of the Stargate writers.
Author's Response: LOL I doubt it would have been shown at 2000 at night if I had been a writer! Thanks for another very kind review!
Think Petes lost it. To say he has a few screws loose, is putting it mildly. He is dillusional and dangerous. Know there is only a few chapters left, so I guess the team will come to her rescue.
At last. Sam came to her senses. Pete is such a leach. You write him so well .
Go get'm Cassie. Sam instinctually knows there is a problem with Pete, from her conversation with Jack.
Great chapter as are all.
Sometimes I wonder about Sam, and her intelligence quotient. Pete is living with her. Why do I get the feeling she is paying the bills. How do smart woman wind up with men like Pete. He was not exactly smart, let alone tall,dark and handsome by any measure. Compared to Jack, Martouf, Narim, Barrett, he was a dismal 1. The 1 score represents his ability in bed, though I should think it would wear thin after a while.
Loving this.
Author's Response: I've known some smart women who have ended up with some right dogs of men, and I don't mean bad looking, I mean somewhere lower on the evolutionary scale than most.
I will begin my comments, not mentioning any names- but the ferret is living with Sam. Dr. Frasier just killed, and Cassie is staying with her. Of course, the ferret is contacting his FBI pal, Dave Farrity, to do a backgound check I guess on Cassie. You write Pete so well. Apparently prior checkup on Sam seems to have this nipped in the bud. What Pete needs is for an unmentionable appendage to be nipped.
You write so well, and your characterizations are so on point.
Maybe you could write a story of Pete sent to Netu- Goauld hell?
I can be evil when required.
Author's Response: Like I said in another review. I can't stand Pete, he's always a villian in my stories.
As always a pleasure reading one of your stories. The characters and thier personalities are always so well written.
I loved the idea of Thor sticking his nose in to get Jack and Sam together. Brilliant!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for reviewing.
Wonderful! Bravo!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks so much for taking the time to let me know!