She needed to stay alive to tell him it was not his fault
Very, very well done! It was written well, and had an exceptional plot! I cannot wait to read more of your material...
Author's Response:
Thank you, of what I remember the end was a bit cheesy. But it was the fist ‘real story’ I wrote.
Thanks again, glad you liked it
I like the POV, well done!
Author's Response:
Thanks, this story was very…uhm…“interesting” to write