LOL, I love it. Especially the fact that though Daniel is so aware of the world around him, he is also so unaware of his place in it.
I love your writing style, there is nothing I can think of that would improve it other than more writing. (hint)
Author's Response:Glad you enjoyed it. I'm a bit of a fan of the observant yet oblivious Daniel, I must admit.
Heh, and thanks for the hint. I'm working on it. Slowly but... well, mostly just slowly.
Awesome little snippet! I love how clueless Daniel is.
Author's Response: He really is, isn't he? Glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for the review.
This was a sweet little piece. Thanks for posting!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review.