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Name: Elizabeth (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.08.22 11:13 · Für: Chapter 5
That was an awsome story...keep up the good work :D


Name: Amaranth Traces (Signed) · Datum: 2007.07.19 07:11 · Für: Chapter 5

I have to say, I hadn't considered that Jolinar had ever relinquished control to Sam at any point, but you presented it well. 

I particularly liked your explanations of why Jolinar waited so long to reveal that she was Tok'ra, and why Sam took her death so hard.

Nicely done.  This story is an interesting insight into what might have been going on between Sam and Jolinar during the episode. 



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