I'm really enjoying the story so far. Great verbal interplay between John and Teyla; it feels very genuine.I'd be interested to hear more about Athosian customs as it relates to intimacy and sexual practices or how Athosian men and women relate to each other in a committed relationship. It'd be interesting to also see how those intimate customs developed and were influenced by the constant threat of death by Wraith culling. It had to have had some effect on every aspect of their lives.I'm looking forward to reading more! Keep up the good work.
You have writen a very good story.
Please do continue. I am a diehard Teyla/John fan and love your stories. I visited your site several times (not recently, `cause I have RL issues.)